Does this makes sense to you, or its been copied from internet? fashion history help me?

I dont know if its been copied from the net but its not very well written.What it says is basically OK but it concentrates mostly on underwear....and come on..you cannot really believe that all women wore flimsy material in the twenties.The hemline around this time shot up and down a bit.It is true to say that women working in the war altered their dress style.Also the hairstyles are fashion.The underwear allowed for greater freedom of movement for sports but prior to this of course women still played sport.Read it. Think.Look at the internet or a book yourself.....its quite interesting.The amount of flesh revealed and which parts is particularly interesting throughout the ages.If you give this in at least check for spelling etc.